This is how I feel this pain



No idea to answer
This sorts of feeling
Differ to anything
Only know I'm hoping
To everything
that's nothing

Now I'm hurt
Slowly go demented
Strong out like I'm dead
Moments that we take is unclear yet
I wish we will soon alright

Your now gone
don't know where done
Still You're the only one
not erase yet in my mind

I'm alone, just sitting with tears
in my eyes dropping
Heart go cracking
Feel I'm dying

I'm in pain
scattered into segment
Lighting me up like bomb
Now I erupt like a Vulcan

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This poem is all about life or it is a feeling when you feel that your dreams is impossible for you to reach.

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Written on October 20, 2022

Submitted by sabtiya_h on October 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XAAAAA XXXXX XBBX XAAA XXXB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 494
Words 98
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 4, 4

Sabtiya Yahsin Hasan

I am 21 years old, from the Philippines, I am a Muslim girl and I am a second year college. I want to join this contest to try, because I really need money. I was having dream of becoming a singer and a song writer before, so I wrote to many verses lyrics and poems, and now it's wasted because those lyrics are now just nothing inside my notebook without value at all, because now I begin to stop myself of reaching my dream to be singer songwriter, I don't want to continue that dream. And I feel that all those lyrics is wasted, that is why I join your contest to make my lyrics and poems have value. Hope I'll win a price. Thank you. Assalamualaikum... more…

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