October's Organza



Hey, look at the crystal moon, at the brown branches ,
At the ashes of my heart , the wrinkled body of the log.
But my heart doesn't averse to being beguiled .
Look at the morning mild of the October , the leaves have ripened to the fall.
Look at those short hill grass , the mushroom small milk-white.
Look at the black berry in the sun , after night .



But , in this October , i spend the whole night scrolling through smiling faces on a screen,
that have been cherry-picked and altered ,to look the best they've ever been .
May be  those , i should look up to , are those with no time to care about posting or tagging who was there .
Maybe those , who are the happiest ,
Don't judge their self-worth on likes but instead on how full their hearts are when they go to sleep at night .


In the morning of those October days,
I want to eat the sun rays brunt by your beauty,
The trimmed hair on your face ,
The fleeting shadows of your spectacle.


But suddenly you think , it long and mad,
The wind of banners, that passes through my life,
And you decide to leave me at the shore of the heart where I have roots .


Look at the cloudy sky, just because I love October ,
doesn't mean it can stay ...


But , who knows what the next October will bring?

About this poem

This about a failure lover , whose love story is comparing with the nature of October

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Written on October 15, 2022

Submitted by aishikad935 on October 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXAA XXXXA XXXX XXX XX X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,255
Words 261
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

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