Hopeless Mind
We have been lied to
That there is light at the end of the tunnel When we cannot even run across the rays
For me, nights are for whipping
In a foreign land
Where I wake up every morning
To show up at a prison
That some call work
Where my feelings are injured
My mouth sealed
My back breaking
All I do is cursing the sun to go down
Getting the coins
I still walk barefooted
365 days
It's the same tone dress that covers my skin
It is my mum and daughter that i break my back for
Where I put my head
A loaf of bread and a can of coke
The only taste my mouth knows
A routine that my body has accepted
My basket becomes too heavy for the pillow
When the sun goes down
Drowning in sorrow
Depression weakening my heart
Slowly consuming my body
About this poem
This poem is the real emotional expression of the poet about some of her life struggles and experiences.
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Written on October 09, 2022
Submitted by lozanalillian4 on October 09, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AB C XCXXXXCD XABX X XXXX EDEXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 755 |
Words | 168 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 8, 4, 1, 4, 5 |
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