Elegy for the loss



The heart of mine was already dead
You gave a new birth to this fool
How am I show that I'm actually sad
You think by doing all this you'll look cool


Now i think that i should have died
You made me wrote these ugly lines
I knew from the start that you always lied
I will make myself like a star which shines


I'll write this piece for the one whose dead
Don't you dare to come now in my future plans
I'm well aware now that you're the one whose bad
So go now with your foolish clans


Those clans doesn't know who you really are
Who'll tell them when you always hide
They'll leave when they find that you're the one who give scar
Surely than you'll change the place from the heart to the grave side


Grave of yours will adore me
But ain't it is better that we burn the body now
And seeing you in a grave will hurt me
I'll put the water in it & will run away somehow


Death of yours may become a rare
And may become the baddest death
Everyone will laugh in your funeral fare
You may never wake up in the good health

About this poem

It's a satirical elegy in about the poet's break up

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Written on October 04, 2022

Submitted by Jatin9ofj on October 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCB DEDE AFCF GDGD HIHI JXJX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,027
Words 224
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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