Ramen House



the clatter of plates the click
of chopsticks dancing on the floor
as a guest unfurls their napkin

the napkin left in the back of the
booth and the wads of straw wrappers
intermingled with scattered rice

the smell of rice and ramen and
braised pork belly and tofu and
the stench of everything mixed
together in the trashcan in the back

these things are all I remember from
working in the ramen house

About this poem

This poem was based on a ramen shop in OKC, called Tamashii Ramen House.

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Written on 2019

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

23 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XXX AAXX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 402
Words 77
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 2

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