First II



I love the way you always
challenge me.
The way you always
keep me on my toes.
The way you always
get my heart beating
like a drum.
This time, it was a race, only the first one
to cross the finish line
was not the winner.
The way you asked me
what I wanted if I wanted if I won and what would happen
if I lost.
I tried to hold out on you, love, but your dancing
fingers and perfect rhythm get me every time.
And when I moaned softly, as our ballet met its coda,
you yanked me so close that my chest was
one with yours and you whispered in my ear,

     “I. Win.”

About this poem

This poem was inspired by a former lover.

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Written on 2018

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACADEFGHBFIDJKLM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 578
Words 126
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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