Sleep III



I love when you are
sleeping, for you are
so very lovely
yet, so unaware.

I love how you are
peacefully at rest
in such an open,
vulnerable state.

I love the way you
smile- that hidden smile
I’ve only caught a
few brief glimpses of
during the day-time.

I love what you have
become when you are
dreaming, my dear, the
way you appear more
dazzling, dreaming
beneath silver rays.

I love you for the
creature you’ve become
and for the creature
you’ve made me in this
satin paradise.

About this poem

This poem is inspired by the song "Sleep" by the 1975.

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Written on 2017

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX AXXX XXBXX XABXXX BXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 488
Words 99
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 6, 5

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