Blue Halls



The snow drifts were         quite high, piling up into the  northern sky, burying        towns and trees and the poor souls who      had fallen asleep on the grass  and had awoken with shivers as snowflakes  left little kisses on their eyelids.

Except that, it was never grass. There was never any grass to begin with. There was no grass        or spring               or sun                    or summer                              or birds.  There was only winter and snow.  And the blinding, white terrain had become both a place of   desolation and  s a n c t u a r y.  The Aroura Borealis danced like a beautiful blue fire across the night sky. Stars blinked in and out of existence.

And somehow, the halls always remained.

The blue halls.                Imagine, if you will, the Colosseum cut into halves and shaped like an elbow macaroni.  Drop it out in the middle of an arctic wasteland and wash it in the blue glow of the northern, night sky.  A bright yellow light poured out of the windows and onto the snow, but no one was ever inside.  Some say it's the doorway to heaven.  Others say it's the gates of hell.

And then there are the strangers. Strangers who wear their lavender, silk headscarves and avoid the rumors of such an exquisite and eclectic piece of architecture.

Others like myself.  "If there is no one inside, then where is the music coming from?" He asked me, his blue eyes shining as blue as the heavenly hues against the midnight clouds.  " The halls will hum if the wind passes through them just so."

We listened to them once more. A low and ancient hum emanated from the structure. It was an old sound that resonated within me-unnerved me.

The mysterious blue halls were not a simple door to some glorious silver city or the passageway to a fiery lake.          The halls were the most beautiful and interesting instrument the universe has even known.

"It's the harmonica of the gods!"   Perhaps one of them   dropped it.

Perhaps it was a flaw in design.  Perhaps it was meant to be silent and with one teensy miscalculation, an entire orchestra of notes were born by the wind.

Perhaps it is telling me to tell you that you should look not towards all that makes you perfect, but the imperfections because that is where true beauty rests.

And you are so beautiful.  The kind of beauty that doesn't know it's own beauty. Like when you are sleeping, and the moon washes over your face. I like when you are sleeping, for you are so beautiful, yet so unaware.

About this poem

Somewhere between prose and poetry, this piece was inspired by a dream I had.

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Written on 2016

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022

Modified on April 04, 2023

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