16 years 5 months and 3 days

Darnell Foster 1981 (Mechanicsburg)



The wind begins to pick up,
Temperature becomes crisp,
Darkness consumes everything.

Everything of beauty dies,
Laughter is no longer heard,
Life now is grey and lonely.

To speak is forbidden,
Smiling is something from a movie,
Nothing feels real.

4 months sitting alone,
Trapped inside my thoughts,
Ever falling into depression.

About this poem

It's been awhile since I have written poetry . This was the title that came to mind.

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Written on October 27, 2022

Submitted by DaDarkness on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XXA BAX XXB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 332
Words 66
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3

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