Do Me Right



Don't diss me, 'cause
Onetime you'll miss me,
You'll need to kiss me,
When you no longer seeing me.
You'll try to do things to impress me
Of which will never impress me.

Don't diss me, because
You'll onetime miss me,
You'll need to kiss me,
Doing things to please me
Of which will never impress me.

Don't try to miss me, when
You know you dissed me,
Don't try to please me, when
You know, you no longer impress me.

You tried to diss me, without knowing
You'll miss me.
Many things you've done to please me,
Forgetting you never impress me again.

I used to see you in my wet dreams,
But now I see you in my nightmares.
Things you did were not fair,
But you still think of making a pair.

Dissing me was not a solution to me,
But missing me was a delusion to you.
Several times, you used to to see me,
But now, you no longer see me,
And now you cry in need of me.

About this poem

This poem is a simple reflection of rejection to love then affliction to be loved.

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Written on October 10, 2022

Submitted by sharry_monks on October 10, 2022

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaAaaA xaAaA baba xaab xxcc axaaa
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 866
Words 200
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 4, 4, 5

Sharry Monks

Sharry Monks born Abdushariff Muhumuza Akiiki is a Ugandan Musical Artist, Creative Artist, Actor, Author and Entrepreneur born on 04, December 1999 to the late Night Lucia Shaban Akiiki (MHSRIP), in Kyenjojo District of Western Uganda. He went various schools for his elementary studies before he joined Makerere University for Bachelors Degree in Drama and Film in 2022. He has released numerous songs including singles and albums, authored many books which are all mainly Distributed by Amazon digital services Inc to various bookstores in the world. He's both a scientific and Artistic Re-searcher in many fields of his interests. He has also written many blogs, articles, and journals among other writeable materials. more…

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