Youre my desire

Karmsin 2007 (Lagos)



Look me in the eyes
Let me see your smile
Let me remise
All the feelings i felt inside
That i havent felt in a while
Tell me your mind

But dont lie to me
I wanna know if what i see
In those eyes
Is truly how it seems
Pls explain what it means
And dont forget pls dont lie
Cause i trust you completely
Youre like my gee
But i am so happy my dream has come to reality

Damn! Who would expect that youre next to me right now
To take away my frowns
And place a crown
On my head
Call me your princess
Make me look decent
Im your present

In a million years youll forever be my fantasy
A dream i can finally see
In reality
Who will believe youre with me
As a guide
My pride

 I wouldnt leave you ever for nobody
Youre that somebody
That understands me completely
Choses for me wisely
Fights with me
But never forget to fight for me
My ride or die

I love you so much

About this poem

This poem is about a point in my life when i missed a certain someone and put my feelings into this poem

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by Favey_jamila on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACBX DDAXXEDDD XXXXXFF DDDDCC DDDDDDE X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 863
Words 187
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 9, 7, 6, 7, 1

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