While I passing through the road!

Rekha Upadhaya 2001 (Kathmandu)



while I passing through the road,
through the edge of that crowd!
it's   early morning  after raining night
 wonder  how much I delight!
my windblown hair,
the sun strike on my glass
I just revive that atmosphere!
sideby river pass through,
looking at the river for a while
I try to compile
how unfair the time is,
it goes on and I have to move on
if stop I should have to burn on!
The silent people on that crowd,
as me there are several
none of their business, none of mine
so the unwanted competition
without they know I win!
timely,I forget and remember
the same river, the discipline
and comparing ,I feel and smile
I have no competition with none
because I won and we all won!
none can stop none
so I move and I move on!

About this poem

It's about the Natures..how we feel while we walk through it considering environment around us...nature is just wow!

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by lusipherin on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCCDEFGHHIJJBKLMNOMHMMMJ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 726
Words 152
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

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