The one who holds my feelings

G V Bhavana 2001 (Bangalore)



Magnified by your looks
You made me the pinnacle of it
Just by being yourself
Made you more magnificent

Dedicating many words for you
That’s the only thing I do
And the words won’t seem fine to you
Because you’re really true

These would impact on me
Which is ethical of me
Switching of you would be hard
Since you crashed me a lot

The footprints you left in my entity
Would make me want you, to live for eternity

Thriving through your heart, so that I could make you mine
And plain yourself to refine

Desired of what you want
Made myself to jaunt
Wish I would find that site
Where my thoughts would fly like kites!

About this poem

This poem is really near to my heart and my feelings..... which i would want to express it, through this!

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by gvbhavana2001 on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AAAA BBXX BB CC XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 142
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 2, 4

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