Ruins



RUINS
Sep,19,   2022


Slowly I watched you disappear
 Watched you burnt-out
 Should have kept my side of the bargain
 Instead I let it gain

It burns
 It hurts
 The warmth of my affection
 Fierce as fire if not tamed

I should have watched you glow
 Should have hid my desire
 But my emotions won't let go
 Instead it fed on you

I caused your ruin
 Oh dearest Gem
 You lost your beauty
 I lost my fury
 As the fire goes off

About this poem

This is about obsession. It can be an obsession for a person,object or hobby. According to the writer, it's about her obsession for a friend of hers

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Written on September 19, 2022

Submitted by falohunhonour02 on September 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XXAX XXAX BXBX AXCCX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 429
Words 91
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 5

Falohun Honour Ayomide

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