Raining down on the bereaved journey



First
I hear the rumbling of
the thunder, their
shrieks of pain....

Then
Slowly, it starts to
shower down
it's big tears....

Shivering
cold gusts of
wind, humbly
numbing our senses....

Trees
rain and wind
resonate, together
in synchrony....

Making
me stand open
as every drop, slides
off my skin, like blood....

It
lasts, it's time
dissolving sorrow
to every corner....
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Visiting a grave in rain.

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Written on June 29, 2022

Submitted by avbil.school.110158 on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXB XXXX CAXX XXDB CXXX XXXDA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 385
Words 81
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

Vinay Rana

My name is Vinay Rana, I am from Uttrakhand, India. Currently, I am studying in high school. I have had an affair with writing for a while now, I would like to marry my pen someday. more…

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