Love At First Sight (An Untold feeling)



On the way in a train
I asked for
a seat


I haven't legal ticket
just holding my
heartbeat


I saw a boy in
a blackish
mask


I Asked for his book
and gave him
a task


Soon felt so boring
just started to
talking


He was listening me
cariusly tht's so
shocking


I know tht's wrong
sharing secrets
with stranger


Some times may be
It can create cause
for danger


But don't know the
reason of my
security


I think have seen
his heart's
purity


His eyes was small
yet looks so
bright


Wearing shirt loose
classy jeans so
tight


I was talking and
reactions like
crazy


He was looking
so chill and
grazy


Finally We left tht train
and reached to
the station


Don't wanna be alone
Just moving in
slow motion


He was carrying a
big bag in his
right hand


Next in the evening
We just walking
on the sand

About this poem

This is a short poem based on a beautiful feeling of love, enjoyment, the beauty of nature etc.

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Written on September 14, 2022

Submitted by shwetathakur941187 on September 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXB XCB DXE XXE FGF HIF XXJ HXJ KCH XXH XIL XIL MXH FMI AGN XDN KXO FFO
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 845
Words 224
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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