Breakup



Cloudy sky about to melt - Dull eyes looked down
She stands but mind flies
Not sure of returning back
Found reasons to cure injury
Wind became so wild and blew forward
Causes stands with still hands
Breeze said goodbye
Stars on vacation, glittering crown of depression
Coloured painting became dusted
Turned next pages of his book
Her book standing still looking high up at the sky
Shadows passed out in the silhouette
Eyes never looked up
Emotions vanished by breakup
Bubbling sadness cloud melted

About this poem

This poem contains a common experience of a guy and a girl about to breakup due to different reasons. As there might be many reasons for a breakup didn't thought of specific reason. It talks of background of breakup using metaphors mostly. But it says the guy enters to a new relationship where girl doesn't.

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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by gathara.jayalath17 on September 03, 2022

Modified on April 07, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJGKLLM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 498
Words 85
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

Suchari Gathara Jayalath

I am a Sri Lankan student doing my advanced level exams this year. You can call me Suchee. I love to spend my leisure time with my pet dog Odi or writing free verse poems. I love simple way of life and writes of ups and downs. more…

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