Beautiful Evening Showers



A beautiful day begins
Then follows the days chores piling in

The dark evening preganant clouds swaying in
And lo!!   showers of blessings raining

Left office to feel the rains
Only to find people & traffic speeding

Stop...wait feel the blessings, my heart said
But no ones listening.. all only speeding

Amidst the traffic on my two wheeler I crawled
To feel every drop  of  pouring blessings

The soaked feeling totally mesmerising
The flooded roads calling
The thunder roaring
The lightening even more whitening

Stop.. wait.. feel the nature calling
But no ones listening...all in hurry speeding

Turned back to childhood time
Like after school enjoyed the rain pouring
To just soak in heaven blessing showering

Stop...wait.. listen to the raindrops falling
Sorry ..but no ones listening  all in hurry speeding..

Me and my two wheeler had fun crawling
Njoying every single drop pouring and completely soaking..

Stop... Listen.. what the rains saying..
Enjoy the showers whilst its pouring..

About this poem

Whilst was yet in office, it began pouring heavily.... As my desk overlooks the window on the 13th floor.... Got mesmerized and poetry began to float and I penned down quickly.

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Written on September 27, 2022

Submitted by m02ferns on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XA AB XB XB XX BBBB BB XBB BB BB BB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,002
Words 177
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2

Maria Fernandes

Just loves life, self and people along with nature ... Which intrigues me to look and ponder with thoughts emotionally woven into beautiful poems. Am a working woman with zest for living life one day at a time and beautifully. more…

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