An Ode to a new Mom



Rocking the baby all through the night,
she rolled over the bed many times,

Aching bones and messy hair,
broken spirits, puffy eyes,
but who cares?

It is half past three but no sign of sleep,
the mother wept but silently.

"No oh no dear you can't complain,
'You are a mother', they said,
you are born to be brave."

"Sleep my baby, sleep through the night,
Let your mother rest for a while."

The baby was reluctant and wide awake,
Putting the mother in dismay.

The mother pulled out all the stops,
Finally the baby dozed off.

'Oh, I can now sleep' sighed the mother in relief,
But then she saw the unwashed feeders,
the unfolded clothes and the leftover beef.

'This is not happening,' she murmured in disbelief.
But this was a story of every single day,
A story she cannot escape or delay.

A mother's chores are countless and perpetual,
Just so that it becomes a ritual.

Yet, as time will pass by,
These little feet will grow in the blink of an eye.

She can then rest as much she wants,
'but what about her youth that has already gone?'

'Age is just a number,' they replied,
She will have plenty of time once the kids fly high,

"What about her bones that will start to crack?
Who will look after her kids when she is not well?"

Such questions keep rising in a mother's mind,
She knows her responsibilities are eternal and her thoughts kind.

But a mother also needs rest, care and respect,
Amidst all the roles she play,
striving to be perfect,
each and everyday.

About this poem

As a new mother and still recovering from the post-partum period, 'an ode to a new mom,' talks about how the mother goes through thick and thin notably when she is trying to make her baby sleep. It also discusses the kinds of judgmental statements and unsolicited advices she gets to hear everyday while raising her first child. This poem is a manifestation of the sacrifices, courage, strength and devotion a mother emanates while raising her children.

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Written on August 20, 2022

Submitted by maham.syedain on September 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:38 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XXX XX XXX AX XB XX CXC CBB DD EE XX XE XX FF GBGB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,477
Words 326
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4

Maham Jazib Hussain

I am a clinical psychologist and a passionate writer. My love for poetry and prose sprouted when I was in grade two and since then I have been writing poems and excerpts. more…

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