After you leave



After you leave
Dilip Gomes
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After you leave,
No moon has risen in the night sky yet,
No birds call, to the sound of chirping,
Only random clouds in the eternal sky,
The midday sun, in search of water,
Thirsty eyes,
Budd is tired of walking on the tip of the dream grass.
Afternoon brown on the lips,
Deep water penetrates and loses to the old address,
Holiday of comfort here,
In the moonlight, mocking night,
So, draw deep scars on the heart
Now I wake up and pick up the rain.
The game of solitude goes on in the naked lonely night,
The words also seem to have become corpses.
Painful hearts and dreams in search,
Dry water on the pillow.
I have captured the clouds just for you
What an afternoon depression,
The open windows are open to the south,
As if you come and crowd on the carpet of my dreams.
I am the capital of pride,
Yet I seek thee unseen,
Sometimes I speak in private,
I mean,
I keep the complaint secret.
Where, in the last hours of the night, the galaxy disappears in an instant.
Only after you leave.

Best Regards
Dilip Gomes

About this poem

it's a deep love poem. after leaving a lover how feels a person who loves too much and i am just explin about the feeings on this poem.

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by rgstexbd on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB Axxxxxxxxxcxxcxxxxxxxxdedexa xB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,074
Words 227
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 31, 2

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