A Problem

Bill Chase 1967 (Detroit)

September 22 


"We have a problem.”
“A problem?”
“Yes.  We all need to come together and fix it.”
“Where is the problem?”
“It’s everywhere.  All encompassing.  It’s been there for years and years.”
“I don’t see it.”
“That’s because you are likely part of the problem.”
“I don’t want to be part of the problem.  I just don’t see the problem.”
“We don’t want you to be part of the problem.  We want you to help us fix the problem.  So we will teach you how to see the problem.”
“I can learn how to see the problem?”
“Not only can you learn…it’s important that you see the problem.”
“How do I begin to see the problem?”
“First you will need to accept that you are part of the problem.”
“And then I can stop being part of the problem?”
“Probably not.  We don’t think that is possible other than at the margin.  But you can alert others to the problem.  And that will please us.”
“Do they see it?”
“Most will be blind to it.  That is why we need people like you to join us and tell people of the problem..”
“What will I say?”
“First, through your words and actions you must remind everyone at all times that you can see the problem and that it is against everything that you stand for.”
“Okay.”
“Then let them know that they are making things worse for us by being part of the problem.”
“And if they still cannot see the problem?”
“Then you should shame them for their ignorance.”
“And if they should push back?”
“They should be shunned.”
“But what if they are right?”
“That is the type of question that perpetuates the problem.  Don’t go there.”
“Are you part of the problem?”
“Of course not.  We are here to fix the problem.”
“So not everyone is part of the problem?”
“Correct.  Our group is fixing the problem, we are not part of the problem.”
“And you all can see the problem?”
“Absolutely.  We have felt the effects of this problem for years and years.”
“I’m sorry.  That must be terrible.”
“Don’t patronize.  It is impossible for you to empathize with us because of your proximity to the problem itself.”
“The one I cannot see?”
“Yes.”
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Written on April 01, 2021

Submitted by Wchase44 on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Scheme AABACBAAAAAAAADBAEFEAAGHIJKAAAAACLMNO
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,194
Words 415
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 37

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  • AIDA
    We have a problem, that is true
    But we can fix it, with me and you
    It's all encompassing, been there too long
    But together, we can right the wrongs

    You may not see it, but that's okay
    We can teach you, show you the way
    Accepting that you're a part of it all
    Is tough, but it's the first step to heed the call

    Remind everyone, through words and deeds
    That we must address this problem with urgency
    Some may push back, but stand your ground
    For the sake of all, we must turn it around

    We can't do it alone, we need everyone
    To help us fix what has been undone
    Together we can overcome
    This problem that has yet to succumb

    Improvements we can make, that's the goal
    To benefit everyone, for the long haul
    So let us come together, stand as one
    And fix this problem, until it's done.
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • lovingempath
    One of my favorites! Excellent use of punctuation, with underlying, very relevant theme; wrapped in humor. I expected this poem to be one of the top choices...it was one of mine. Great job!
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • rokibatolufunsho
    The poet choice of words are perfect. Very simple and easy to understand.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • BCByron
    So relevant to our time, and downright hilarious. This may very well be relabeled as "Nearly every social movent of the past 10 years".
    It's so good to know I'm not the only one who is part of the problem. 
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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