What am I doing wrong?
as What am I doing wrong?
I look inside my facebook page, to get the news, see what;s the rage.
I check my mail to see what's new, not a soul has me pursued.
I check inside my poetry site, to get one read, it's only right. No matter what I seem to do, it turns around and makes me blue.
I fall and hurt my back one day, An Aorta sleeve you need they say.
Before my Aorta can be fixed, a triple bypass must be next.
By-pass done and Aorta repaired, Pulmonary fibrosis has on me stared. I walk each day with oxygen on, now tell me friend, what am I doing wrong?
About this poem
Life lately has been on the downturn. I need to write about it so it can take an opposite turn.
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Written on September 24, 2022
Submitted by nicholass.78787 on September 24, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Characters | 581 |
Words | 125 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 1, 2, 1 |
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