Submission



The waves keep on washing over me, undulating into the far reaches of my soul,
My eyes are all turned inward into the very core of my being.. I see it all there,
The ravaging wildfires of my soul, consuming every strand of passion in my flesh, every drop of my blood.

There you are, you float in all glorious nakedness, in the splendor of innocence and purity,
The thunderous clouds of eternal beauty float placidly right over my face, and every glimpse of the gods of the perpetual heavens sends tingling spasms in every thread of my flesh.

I see the beauty in everything that comes in contact with my eyes. I see me, I see you... basking in the ephemeral beauty of goodness. We are entwined as if eternity has only our bodies to spun around. We are beautiful in every way..

The heavens have not left us one moment for she is also fascinated with the grandeur of our being, of our delicate breaths that so fleetingly brush our lips as they touch in all surreal passion.

Our eyes, yes our eyes speak of indefatigable passion, that of godly nature, of primordial intensity, so much so that even the brightest blaze of the god's trails disappear as soon as they leave their mark on the pitch black darkness of bliss, of untamed bliss.

We hear the claps of thunder from afar, as the gods race with each other in passion not unlike the one engulfing us from the very moment we are conceived. My lips silently spell enchantments of the most intense passion, you hear me, you feel me... and the twitch of your flesh sends my mind into frenzy.

Ah, here we are, basking in all the tenderness of heavens, we have known all along the wonders and woes of heavens,
Our bestial penchants unbeknownst to the people around us, sit silently amid all silence and calm,
like a sleeping dragon ready to be awaken by the slightest touch of desire, its flame floats around even in the deepest of its slumber.

Time passes us by, we are untouched, space roams around us in all its perpetual glory, we are warmly enveloped in their perfect unison, and so we submit without the slightest tinge of fear.

We remain like this, I'd love to with all of me. I am forever transfixed in all this bliss,
the heavens above roars melodically in all the beauty of angelic charm and Hades below flaunts his fiery bravado,
and in the middle of all this grand chaos, we submit, we remain calm and deeply intertwined.  We submit...

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Written on September 24, 2022

Submitted by michaelangelo1381 on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXX AX X X B A XXX X BXX
Characters 2,411
Words 460
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 1, 3

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