Sun's admirer

Aksy 2003 (India)



Tearing my gaze from the screen;
Saw a corner of my house;
Lit up with that golden mesmerizing beam
Simultaneously, the clouds played well;
Embraced their beloved sun
Soon the rays were gone;
Tress started whirling their leaves;
The sight itself is lovable
Clouds want their lover to rest;
Yet, in the process of care;
Piercing rays through them is what they get
I wonder, did the sun cried?;
While choosing between love and duty
Whatever figure they make doesn't matter;
It's all for their dear's sake;
A quadrilateral of veracious fondness
Though these miracles of nature;
Resemble various geometries
Oh, how to be so impartial;
Only their heart held them captive

About this poem

It's a poem which I wrote while sitting in my verandah when I noticed the beauty of weather that day. Wind was blowing, there were clouds in the sky and then came a ray of sunlight from between the clouds which made me pen down this poem.

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Written on September 14, 2021

Submitted by aksharasingh340 on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPNQHR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 666
Words 124
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Aksy

Hello:) I'm an 18 y/o who's done with her schooling and currently preparing for college exams. My hobbies are singing, sketching and writing. Other than these, I'm from India and my real name is Akshara more…

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