Southern Outpost ... Lachish, Israel, 587 BCE



Omniscient eyes upon us seem leering
Out from a darkness that dreadfully grows—
A deluge of darkness, dreadless, fearless,
Swallowing all as it easily goes.
This darkness fills the empyreal heights,
Its quietude the Negev's lonely plains.
Distant jackals alone are heard howling
Nocturnal omens and ghostly refrains.

The signal fires, once burning, now fade
Into the void of imperious night,
And all in oblivion's broad-sweeping raid
Fall to the Chaldean's rapacious might.

About this poem

This poem is about the Babylonian [Chaldean] conquest of what we today refer to as the Middle East. In the 6th century BCE, a brutal and ineluctable fate hung over the entire region—all was hopeless, nothing could stop it, and real people died. I was hoping, in this short poem, to capture a thread of the desperateness and dread of a situation I couldn't imagine.

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Written on November 14, 2020

Submitted by Vixility on August 30, 2022

Modified on March 09, 2023

24 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXBXCAC DEDE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 477
Words 80
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 4

John W. May

John W. May has lived in Colorado all his life. He currently works in the field of ophthalmology and loves to mountain bike and read about history. John first became a lover of poetry in 2008 after having read a poem by John Milton. He has been reading and studying the works of various poets since. His favorite poets are Emily Dickinson, Fyodor Tyutchev and W. B. Yeats. more…

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2 Comments
  • Journey
    Loved the imagery skilfully created in Rhyme And Rhythm adding to your turn of phrase
    That makes this poem a cleverly crafted creation
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • Vixility
      Thank you for your kind words, Journey. I’ve always enjoyed writing metered and rhymed verse—I love seeing what path the Ideal will take when it merges with a given poetic structure (it’s like watching the path water 'chooses' to take when it meets the objects that resist it). 
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • JokerGem
    I feel this evokes what the scene was like. Also, the words are impressively vibrant. A solid work
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • Vixility
      Thank you, JokerGem! I love to read and study military history and I often wonder what my own disposition would be in a situation as bleak as Lachish—manning an outpost with a couple thousand soldiers while the signal fires from other nearby outposts are going out one by one, knowing that an army of 75,000 war-hardened, bloodthirsty Babylonians are descending on your position. It’s an impossible situation to imagine.

      Anyhow, thank you so much for the thumbs up, greatly appreciated.
       
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • JokerGem
      Keep at it. It seems the concepts one can unravel from wars (direness, futility, hopelessness) are not explored enough.
      LikeReply 11 year ago

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