Something Untold



Thought there was a spark
That once gleamed in the dark
In a burrow that was in the park
In a dream so hollow and stark.

Said I like you in black
 And wished you'd like me back
Pent up emotions just like a stack
That easily crumbled and crack .

Should I be bold and have it  told
For  your feelings,  left to behold
But how I wish I just could
So that i'd be  happy - be good .

About this poem

It is a poem about someone who cannot tell his long time love interest. And he wrote a poem as a medium to express his love.

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Written on February 14, 2017

Submitted by luijayidayan123 on August 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA BBBB CCDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 388
Words 91
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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