MY LIFE: A MESS

Ariana Gold 2007 (Mumbai)



I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one ever loved me, No one ever cared

I was alone in my room, crying and stressed
Thinking about, from others what made me less
I myself didn't know I was depressed
Kept my hopes high even when I was a mess
Was my birth a mistake?
This thought gave me a heartache

I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one ever loved me, No one ever cared

Rejected by my crush, I was gloomed and distressed
Nothing in my life ever made me feel blessed
My parents hated the way I dressed
This made me even more depressed
Did only their feelings matter?
Don't I have a life to live for myself?

I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one will ever love me, No one will ever care
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Written on August 28, 2022

Submitted by rosiesofrubies on August 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC dedeff ABC ddddxx ABx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 692
Words 150
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 6, 3, 6, 3

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