Ma comète☄️
Gracheillou Navaira 2022 (Davao City)
Amidst of my darkest night
Realms of my deepest, blackest sky
Nothing's change, Nothing's new
Hard sigh goes through
Sun means reality
Moon brings serenity
Till beyond and infinity
Stars shines luminously
In the depths of space
Upon it's shadow-steady pace
Showed up with flaming crest
Tail's speed in endless quest
At the moment my world freeze's
My eyes glazing as it amazes
As far as two billion miles—
In two seconds, it creates piles
Of inexplicable smiles.
A lover, as you think I am.
Of a comet that does not give a damn.
As you come near to me,
Is it enough for you just to see?
Soudaine. Ma comète d'amour
Blizzardly ranging in the opposite direction of sunlight trails
Flaming snowball, I feel
Soudaine. You're falling—I fell first.
All these whispered wishes
My lips are longing for that kisses.
The pessimism in my heart takes over; the acrimony I feel makes me shiver.
Apprehension—I noticed.
You want to step back.
I said "no please."
You hate how things can feel so right.
You said, "you don't see the sunlight, it's not so bright."
What else can I do?
To keep myself from unloving you?
My comet is not a meteorite
We both know our time isn't right.
I just want to be with you,
but why does it hurt when I grasp to hold on to you?
All I ever wanted was to be part of your light in your heart,
To tie a knot and never be apart.
But as what i see
You're fading as u used to be
I know you're just passing by
And you know I hate goodbye's.
-graysky
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Written on July 28, 2022
Submitted by gracheillou.navaira on August 03, 2022
Modified on May 03, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,499 |
Words | 314 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 10, 5, 5, 4 |
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