Ma comète☄️



Amidst of my darkest night
Realms of my deepest, blackest sky
Nothing's change, Nothing's new
Hard sigh goes through

Sun means reality
Moon brings serenity
Till beyond and infinity
Stars shines luminously


In the depths of space
Upon it's shadow-steady pace
Showed up with flaming crest
Tail's speed in endless quest

At the moment my world freeze's
My eyes glazing as it amazes
As far as two billion miles—
In two seconds, it creates piles
Of inexplicable smiles.


A lover, as you think I am.
Of a comet that does not give a damn.
As you come near to me,
Is it enough for you just to see?


Soudaine. Ma comète d'amour
Blizzardly ranging in the opposite direction of sunlight trails
Flaming snowball, I feel
Soudaine. You're falling—I fell first.

All these whispered wishes
My lips are longing for that kisses.
The pessimism in my heart takes over; the acrimony I feel makes me shiver.
 
 
Apprehension—I noticed.
You want to step back.
I said "no please."
You hate how things can feel so right.
You said, "you don't see the sunlight, it's not so bright."


What else can I do?
To keep myself from unloving you?
My comet is not a meteorite
We both know our time isn't right.
 

I just want  to be with you,
 but why does it hurt when I grasp to hold on to you?
All I ever wanted was to be part of your light in your heart,
To tie a knot and never be apart.
 

But as what i see
You're fading as u used to be
I know you're just passing by
And you know I hate goodbye's.



-graysky
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Written on July 28, 2022

Submitted by gracheillou.navaira on August 03, 2022

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:38 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCC DDDE FFGG FHIII JJDD KXEX HXK XXXAA CCAA CCLL DDBF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,499
Words 314
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 10, 5, 5, 4

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