Lord I hear you now



Lord, I see you
I see your hand stretched out tirelessly to the world I see you constantly being denied and forsaken
 I see you never giving up and continuously granting mercy to the undeserving
 I see them befriending evil
 I see them limiting your grace to being an obstacle against their so-called freedom
 ...whilst they're just mere corpses dancing at their own funerals, In the name of "only living once"
 You have granted life ,yet they choose to take refuge next to their graves
 I had to understand why they needed to be rescued from death
For It is the same death painted with the brush of appealing deceit
Filled with temporary highs that one has to constantly seek in exchange for their soul
...granted that you have eternal peace offered to everyone who chooses to accept it and Jesus paid the price
All they have to do is ACCEPT?
 Lord, you watch this?
Your very own giving up the same purpose you placed in their existence to reap greatness and abundance.
Yet they choose to seek greatness in the limited fading riches of this world which will too perish with their master
 How devious is their master? Whom they dauntlessly worship with their entire being.
Oh, God! I get it now,
Jesus I'm sorry
Weeping for the forgiveness of your very own foe ?

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Written on August 30, 2022

Submitted by carlomaseko2911 on August 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMFNCOPQ
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,271
Words 234
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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