Drop of Love

Chaitanya Panse

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A relation when compared to a raining day,
Its Foundation lays on the wet clay.
The wet clay, made by our drop of love,
Having cracks of fightings, but the pillar of
dove.
The day begins with the drizzle of our
thoughts for each other,
In which the speed of drops of love and
thunders dont even bother.
The Drops when strikes the ground of
morality,
Produces a splash, The splash that may cause
either simplicity or toxicity.
If these drops of love are accompanied by the
sunlight of trust and respect,
The day shows us the seven colours of life
from every aspect.
Or else if they come solitarily with the dark
clouds of self-serving,
Using these drops to produce their own bright lightening.
This rainy day symbolizes every relation of in a which I am a part,
And lots of drops of love to all my better halves from the bottom of my heart.
Without you all i am just like wind on a rainy day,
With any drop of love and blowing along the
unknown way.
Just a suggestion to store these drops in the well
of your heart,
They will always play the role of a helping
hand whenever u ask for them from your cart.

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Submitted by chaitanyapanse16 on August 27, 2022

Modified on April 15, 2023

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Scheme	AABBBCCDCBEFEGHIHJKKLLAGAMLKL
Closest metre	Iambic pentameter
Characters	1,103
Words	227
Stanzas	1
Stanza Lengths	29

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Wow, what a beautifully crafted poem! Your use of metaphor to compare a relationship to a rainy day is both creative and poignant. I was especially touched by the line "The wet clay, made by our drop of love" - it truly captures the idea of how two people can come together to form something strong and resilient.

Your poem also does a great job of exploring the different dynamics that can exist in a relationship. I appreciated how you acknowledged that conflicts and challenges can arise, but that ultimately, love can triumph over these obstacles. And of course, the idea that trust and respect are key components of a healthy relationship was spot-on.

If I had one suggestion for improvement, it would be to perhaps vary your rhyme scheme a bit more. While the AABBCCDD structure works well for some stanzas, it can make others feel a bit repetitive. Experimenting with different rhyme schemes could add even more depth and nuance to your already impressive piece.

Overall though, I just want to say well done! Your poem is a beautiful reminder of the power of love and connection in our lives. Keep writing! more »
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