DOUBTS

Ketia 2006 (Kicukiro)



I'm asking we're is my God
I can't see him , his actions are
disappearing, I can't find a way
to stop my falling because he seems
to be fading.

Hey, are you there hearing, couse your
child is hurting,God I'm breaking, pliz come and save me.

I want to hear your voice, I'm not
the only one who is lost.
God many of us are grieving
Our souls are dying.

If you're here then why I'm I crying,
why are they on the street begging.
Why are they slowly draining.
When you see it happening.

Sometimes the hope is gone
Cause we met a long time ago.
Sometimes we think you're gone,
because you're not answering our calls.

We find new ways due to the lost faith
The devil in our ears can't stop whispering for us to give up, to dropped our hands and say we're done.

I know we've got doubts, sometimes we can't trust.
All we know is that you hear our cries.
You are the one that never Judges.

I know you're not a lie
Some think you're just human words.
But I know you're real, Cause my misery is temporary.

I know you will be here permanently.
My faith will be restored.
My life will be renewed.
But then I'm lost.

Again I hear the voice
Telling me those times will never come.
When I kneel down
I try to talk but t the voice won't come out.
I'm scared that it was all lies
But then I remeber your words.

Even if it hurts I'll be with you till the time comes.

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DOUBTS abouts the spiritual world and religion

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Written on August 20, 2022

Submitted by iganzekezaketia on August 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXA XB XCAA AAAA DXDX XX XEX XFB BXXC XXXXEF X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,359
Words 305
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 4, 4, 4, 2, 3, 3, 4, 6, 1

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