About her

Sumit Patwal 2004 (Dehradun)



Its hard to describe her in phrases
First time i saw her - Acting all shy & nervous
The more I got to know her I felt like I was being pulled to perfection

Those secretive yet honest eyes,
Those charming chubby cheeks, always filled  with happiness seemed like a well prepared dumpling
Those charming yet elegant looks,
Simple yet sexy body.
That disappointed or sad look always made me feel like a puppy asking for its food

She is so close to me yet so far like a goddamn dream in the grasp of your hand & yet unachievable

Wish I could have her but can't ..................
She is too perfect to be in clutch of mine


I am lost for words for her ...... While writing and thinking...........
 I am just admiring her

About this poem

The poem is about a girl I thought of , On a rainy day the thought of writing this poem suddenly came to me.

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Written on February 22, 2022

Submitted by patwalsumit22 on August 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XAXXX X XX AX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 725
Words 148
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 1, 2, 2

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