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What will I say?



What, shall, I say?
If, I, did, not love, who, could make, me feel, okay?
If, the rose, did, not bloom, then autumn, would, prove!
Your, love, still, paves, my way!
Who, is, the best?
With, no heart, a numb, quest!
Yet, life, does progress!
Today, and tomorrow, strive, my, beautiful, friend!

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A reflection about enduring and living! Not just existing!

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by devon_b on August 25, 2022

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  • jerrylogie
    I found this to be a very good poem AFTER I read it the 2nd and 3rd time, ignoring the punctuation. All the commas actually distract from the point being made and interrupts the flow and rythem of the poem...The versus were excellent... 
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    • devon_b
      ty I really appreciate the honesty because I've been struggling with should I always add the commas or let them flow more! 5 stars! I really needed that! Thanks, DevonTBates2022©
      LikeReplyReport25 days ago

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