Less, much less



He hardly spoke any words
only two — 
or you could call it one

the last thing
he said
was bye-bye

flight-feathers
veined and hairlike
with interlocking barbules

of  sound
the bye-bye trapped
a breath of air

the two linked words
drifted out
on a calm lake

that lay there
with a single purpose — 
to receive final words

and allow them
to drift on its surface
out and further out

on the lake of  thought
and composure
encircled by mountains

the simple phrase
soared upwards
to the highest peak

where it would be planted
like a flag
would eventually be enshrined

each identical word carefully
balanced either side
of the invisible join — 

like baby talk
he put equal emphasis
on each word

his face was pinched
and his bird beak
very prominent

there have never been
two joined words
with so much space around them

pack up all my cares and woes
light the light
I’ll arrive late tonight

blackbird     bye bye

bye
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Written on 2017

Submitted by Drone232 on August 15, 2022

Modified on April 28, 2023

53 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXX BXC XBA XXD AEX DFA GFE XXX XAH XXX XXX XFX XHX XAG XII C
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 948
Words 178
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1

Moniza Alvi

Moniza Alvi was born in Pakistan and grew up in England. Her most recent collection, At the Time of Partition (Bloodaxe Books, 2013), was shortlisted for the T.S. Eliot Prize. more…

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