Ivory Heart



the enamored look
you gave me
when we first met
like the carved ivory flower
that holds close against my chest

when you told me
 you loved
everything about me

your eyes gleamed
like a dull milkyway
one that sparked
something within
alike phantom chains
around my wrists;
my heart

those delicate words
ran off your lips
a fountain of poison
alike drunken men
spewing lies
harshly
like the vodka you sip

ivory eyes
vodka lies
dripping from your lips
onto mine

About this poem

this is a poem about a lover that treated me like i was just another drink. He had an issue with partying and the kind of coldness that i think of is a shade of ivory that was alwyas shown across is eyes. In his soul.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on May 10, 2022

Submitted by vobrien23 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

33 sec read
3

Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXX AXA XXXXXXX XBXXCAX CCBX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 486
Words 110
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 7, 7, 4

Vivien OBrien

I am a 22 year-old writer. I started writing poems, short stories, chapter books when I was 15. I enjoy expressing myself not only online but in person too. This work is from my chapter book "Details of a Broken Heart" more…

All Vivien OBrien poems | Vivien OBrien Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem Ivory Heart with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Ivory Heart" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 19 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/134084/ivory-heart>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Vivien OBrien

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    11
    days
    19
    hours
    42
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem, "The cask of Amontillado"?
    A Emily Dickinson
    B Miguel De Cervantes
    C Edgar Allan Poe
    D Rudyard Kipling