Sometimes not so great



Sometimes i feel this world is so great 

But then i think there are also many things to hate

Oh god oh god you gave us fine air

But water and diamond are so rare

Oh god oh god you gave us bright sun 

But the UV rays will make us run

Sorry god sorry god for all that i am and will speak 

Don’t punish me,because I am already very weak.

Oh god oh god you gave us food to eat

I wish i could spell my wand “abo cabo” and get some more avocado

Oh god oh god you gave us land to walk

But i wish it could expand

Oh god oh god you gave us mouth to speak

But I have to stop now cuz I have a very talkative streak.

About this poem

This poem is about how we have everything but still nothing!!

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Written on July 29, 2022

Submitted by Yogya on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B B C C D D X X X X D D
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 626
Words 150
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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