Past



Looser, failure,useless
Just some common comments of people,
If you endeavour
Their voice becomes feeble.

Lowering of your self esteem
Is the priceless result of their dream,
It’s just drops with every word they say
Esteem becoming mist, vanishing away.

Your picture perfect present converts to dream demolishing  day by day
You are shattered into millions of tiny pieces,
Your sucess clock delays
Your thinking ability gradually ceases.

But
 
Whom do you think you’re lowering your esteem for?
The benign betrayers who portrayed only your fault
Whose greetings starts with grievances,
Those whom you know, but only by name
Those who never felt shame, to defame.

Now it’s time to shine and succeed
Be your solitary support,
Because in this world, no one but your shadow will escort
They will be leaning on your feet..

About this poem

This poem tells what a person feels when he receives deteriorating comments from people.. How his past affects his present which will eventually affect his future..

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Written on July 31, 2022

Submitted by adityabhank on July 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB CCAD DAAA XXAEE XFFX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 827
Words 151
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4

Aditya bhan Kanojia

Hi! I am a student of grade 9th, living in the streets of Lucknow,Uttar Pradesh. I love reading and writing poems.. I like to read poems of famous writers like Rabindranath Tagore and Willam Wordsworth. more…

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