Cries of a loving heart



I feel that rare feeling
The one that is so odd
The one that makes me feel old
It shines to me so bright like gold

I hope that you see
How i can afford
To you it may seem as a fraud

But i pray that you see
That it is no joke
You'll open your eyes and see,
For you what i hope

As time flies
you ignore my cries
For i behave as a child
But i will have to fight

Fight for the one
The one and only one
The one that i want

Am ready for the chase
So i can confirm my place
And now it's a bet
I'll do it just for your sake
I know you'll see its not for games

About this poem

The inspiration to write this poem was got from my personal experience for a person that i loved and seemed to not notice it.

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Written on July 10, 2022

Submitted by Ndahipadamz on July 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA BXX BXBX CCXX DDX EEXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 560
Words 139
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 5

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