Can I Have Off Today?



Hey Life! It’s me..! Shall I introduce myself to you?
I guess I don’t need to do so…
Life! Who else can know me better than you?
I’m the one always being your puppet to play…
I’m the one in which, being a pain you stay!
Life! You broke my heart several times…
I was blank, had no crimes!
Did I blame you?
Life! You have taken away the hope from me,
Hope to live and to flee!
Did I blame you?
Life! You gave me stones when I asked for Peace…
Throughout that pain you left no ease!
Did I blame you?
Life! You have treated me as I don’t get hurt,
You left me in dark and dirt!
Did I blame you?
Life! I’m not asking for a permanent relief,
Coz you’ll not give me as I believe!
But Life! I need an off to be hard again,
Hard enough to bear the sufferings you let me go through
And to bear all the pain.
Dear Life,
Can I have off Today?

About this poem

This poem is about life. All the hardships that life brings for us. In this poem, the poet is asking for a day off from all the sorrows, struggle, and pains of life.

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Written on August 01, 2022

Submitted by Ramishajaved3 on July 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abaccddAeeAfgAhhAijkalmc
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 192
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

Ramisha Javaid

I’m Ramisha Javaid , an English Literature Student from Pakistan. I love literature and so love writing poems as well. more…

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