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Battle of Sin

Jason John Goodrich 1974 (Vermont)

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He was sent from above
Being born pure like a dove
We were the ones He was here to change, ending all of our sinful games. Ready to teach, showing His love, only to be led away and judged. Slave he was, slaves we are the time will come when we all go far. Hell is a place we all can go, but Yeshua will be the one to tell you so. So, learn to love.

About this poem

I wrote this poem during a dark time in my youth. I'm 48, and I am writing this in hopes of more people struggling with suicide.

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Written on March 17, 1997

Submitted by jasonj.15481 on July 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAA
Characters 348
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
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