A Day In The Park

Bamil Gutierrez 1969 (Puerto Rico)



A Day In The Park

Walking down the alley of life
feeling all the essence i could receive
the fragrance of the leaves slapping over gently
my face when falling from the trees.

I keep walking with no rush along the verge
admiring all the beauty that God has made
it's sunny, it's cloudy, it's blue
the sky is on its prime for a wonderful day.

The pallet diverging colors
like a rainbow in the sun
pumping nature pure the green is
the master of the spring turning to hope.

I sat down in the bench listening clearly the birds
the crazy flying of the butterflies
the picking timing of the hummingbird
and the sun rising on my face.

After a beautiful day of lovely pictures
flashing in my eyes like an hourglass lost in time
now that i saw what some hours god could draw
you can imagine what he can fix in a whole life.

About this poem

This is about how beautiful it is to walk and just contemplate nature and all its wonders.

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Written on July 10, 2021

Submitted by BamilMusicPoetry369! on July 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 818
Words 166
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Bamil Gutierrez

BAMIL is a Puerto Rican multi-instrumentalist, singer-songwriter, Poet, engineer and record producer. His work can be found on the award winning productions with smooth jazz 'Elements 119', hard rock 'Buildings, Roads + Minds' and on his solo works. more…

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  • Dougla$Irishman
    What a delightful poem about God's nature !
    The best things in life are free, just take in God's handiwork like a walk in the park !
    These things delight the eyes, ears and mind, what more could we ask for ?
    Do I want more, seek God and His ways and you will be pleasantly surprised .
    Thankyou for reminding us we are so blessed !!
     
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