You



Y O U

It is late
My eyelids should be taking camp
My breathing should be on low tide
I can't, I know it is late
But these thoughts I cannot hide

It is late
I am slowly approaching rest
But then I feel the caress of your scent
A promise for another day
" I'm still here" is what it is trying to say

I know it is late
But your eyes are like sunrise
Elevating light into my mind
Darkness decomposed, happiness regenerating
It is always you and that is frightening

I accept that it is late
Although the night has grown old
Fading like the fear inside me
"You entice me" is what I finally know
Scary maybe, but exciting... Definitely

My sleep is late and the day is born
But now I see two beautiful views
Sunrising behind me and your...
Your eyes
You're next to me, my fellow muse

My heart beat is never late
To speed through every moment with you
My breathing will always rush in currents
Just in time to crash with yours
This... I can never be late for this
With you
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About this poem

This is a romance poetry piece. Where the partner expresses her infatuation with metaphors.

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Written on July 16, 2021

Submitted by Nanda_Regine on June 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme a Bxcbc Bxxdd bexff bxgxg xhxeh baxxxad
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 980
Words 203
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 7

Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa

Nandawula is a young poet who has self-published her first poetry collection, "Inside Her Roses". She has been a writer for years and has grown exponentially. Her ability to to craft her own descriptive metaphors and personification has truly been a highlight for her readers. more…

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