Flicker

Rachelle Coetzee 2003 (Pretoria)

June 22 


I fell in love.
I fell in love with that mischievous smile you love to flaunt.
I fell in love with those eyes that hold earthquakes strong enough to bring mountains to their knees.
I fell in love with the way my name sounds rolling off your tongue.

But I need to learn that I can't make homes out of humans,
and that this spark is not a fire meant to keep me warm,
that even though it felt like your arms were walls meant to protect me from my own internal storms,
you aren't mine.

So even though my mind is littered with you
and you've rooted yourself deep into everything single aspect of my life
I need to accept that the flicker of emotion in your hazel eyes
was merely my mind playing tricks on me,
making me hope

That you could be in love with me too.

About this poem

This poem is about falling in love with someone who isn't meant to be yours.

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Written on January 04, 2022

Submitted by rachellecoetzee on June 25, 2022

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX AXXXX A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 768
Words 162
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 1

Rachelle Coetzee

I'm a 19 year old student from Pretoria, South Africa. I've always had a passion for writing and I hope to share it with like minded people. more…

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  • cfautherree
    Out of all the poems I pinned 3. And this one out of the over 100 poems caught my eyes and spoke to me the deepest. It described how I currently feel. I absolutely love this poem.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • cannie2710
    I enjoyed and loved it. My favorite thing to read is love story's and poems.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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