every rose has its fins



in my dream we
sat on a sea boulder
eating dragon-fried
rice and asking the
kind of questions whose
answers are only written over
time no words just a twitch
of cheek-under-glance an
involuntary wondering
of will you touch my secret
face that way will
there be hope will
even the sharks swim a
murmuration is it really
possible that this edge is
the center of something
else and that all the salt-scored
water rushing across the
earth isn’t going
anywhere is already
home where it belongs

About this poem

I wrote this the morning after I felt *that thing* with someone. I was so hopeful. So sure. When I was leaving, I made the split-second decision to “forget” my favorite sunglasses on his coffee table. It seemed like the most reckless thing I’d ever done and I wondered if I’d just jinxed things. Maybe I did, as it’s over now. Hope is so intense, and for me it always gets wrapped up in that longing for home.

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Written on August 13, 2021

Submitted by laramaryland on June 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEBFGHIJJDAKHLDHAM
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 505
Words 102
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21

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