Beneath The Daisies



Beneath The Daisies

No one knows just why it happen on that lovely day in June.
The pain was just subsiding as she lay there on the bed.
And the life that passed beside her that had entered all too soon,
She lay down in a towel -- pillowed linen for the head.

No one hailed the doctor and no one hailed the priest,
For the men were all out working far afield.
And these private matters hastened the decision cherished least--
A bit of ribbon around the bundle fate had sealed.

Now she the only bearer, there was no choir hymn --
No procession all of folks in silent talk.
And she lay her little bundle beneath the daisies, tucked well in,
And she cried her tears there by the garden walk.

Then the flowers did hail the garden to all that is above
And the breeze, it whispered hymns to fill the sky,
While she picked a yellow daisy and she vowed unending love--
A drying tear, a little prayer, a sad goodbye.  

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote about my grandmother, who had a miscarriage while living on the farm back in the early 1900s. According to my mother, my grandmother struggled all her life with her decision to bury the baby in the flower garden. When my mother told me the story I was quite surprised that she asked me if what my grandmother did was the moral thing to do. After many second thoughts, I always wondered if my mother was talking about my grandmother in the first place. I will never know. I was afraid to ask. 

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Written on March 15, 1995

Submitted by fxkortuem.111 on June 08, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABAB CDCD XEXE FGFG
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 920
Words 192
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4

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2 Comments
  • lovingempath
    When a poem touches me enough to make me cry, I consider that a triumph. This poem is absolutely beautiful!
    LikeReply 11 year ago
  • ryancflecker
    The somber tone, circumstances, and uncomfortable imagery combined to make a thought provoking poem
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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