Awakening



It isn’t the truck grinding out disdain  
in the morning’s half-light alley  
or the backdoor cricket scratching a limb  
that unhinges me from my dreams.

Percussions of the night  
find their rightful place in dreams
shaking chains from the other side  
like the unrequited Marley.  

The trespass that jogs me up  
is a welcome footfall that slips between us
smooth as paper under Christmas ribbon
and a precious limb sure to push against my ribs

nudging into my soul
to let me know  
that even in the deepest reverie
or across the widest Lethe  

Wherever I step, he will follow.  

 

About this poem

Regarding my 3-year-old son when he would sleepwalk into our bedroom to slip in and dream between us.

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Written on September 20, 2020

Submitted by richardkurtz on June 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXB XBXA XXXX XCAX C
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 600
Words 122
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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