Waiting (3)



River flows through singing silent murmurs
The young woman stood up by the side and looked at the sky.

When the boat will bring her heart back
She will take care of him.

Emotions increase without seeing him
In the middle of the heart, beat did not stay.

Everyone came back but he did not
He did not appear to be seen.

Her thin mind is sad by thinking
It's raining cats and dogs through her eyes.

How long has it been passed like this?
Still waiting for her love to come.

(Dedicated to those lonely souls who wait for their expatriate loves.)
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Submitted by hakikur on June 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XA AX XX XX XX X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 547
Words 117
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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