Crushed



Crushed

I was lookin' at the sky Usually the way as it is! Hopin' for a new start And the way it begins!

The sudden spark in the sky Capture my eyes… Hey, it's my secret happenin' Listen to me, guys!!

So, if it is going' to rain Then let it be I'm waitin'…
 Because I just thought I'm in love Are you guys gettin'!!

The thunder strikin' in the sky tryin' to ask me "Are you thinkin' to fall in love with someone? "
And if you are, then this is a miracle You're not that type of person!

The sky was shocked and was like "So, what you've done? "
My Sweaty this is not love Because you are self-obsessed one…

 He laughed at me and said You'll never love anyone anymore…
He might just your crush And I was like, "Are you sure? "

I said, "Oh Yes, I am in love! " Replied the sky… "Alright then" he sparkled again With a goodbye!

The sky was normal again But I was confused… 'll he accepts me Or he will refuse!!

But oh my How cute he is, dude!! I'll ask him one day "Would you stop being so cute? "

Those who are listening to me Go back to your work now!!
He is just my another crush Now, don't ask me how!!

I know I'm falling for him He might be the second one!
But yeah, I know I had a crush on someone!!

About this poem

This poem is about the youngsters who casually feels to fall in love with someone, but when they recognized that this wasn't love anymore.. It is just a crush

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Written on June 11, 2022

Submitted by laxmippatil17 on June 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X AA AA AA XX X X X AX AA
Characters 1,236
Words 273
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2

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