She Follows



She follows her down yonder path
filled with sunshine and morning light,
content to walk on the same path
exchanging looks of sweet delight.

The day wears on, they take a turn
one's steps fall behind the other;
the distance grows, the young one knows
there are new paths to discover.

Her pace quickens to breathe fresh air,
the gap grows wider as it should;
distinct paths forward for each one,
she would not change it if she could.

About this poem

I wrote this poem while thinking about my changing relationships with my teenage and soon to be teenage daughters.

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Written on May 11, 2022

Submitted by michocki on May 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB XCXC XDXD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 434
Words 88
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

Lorraine Visvikis

I live in a suburb in the Northeast. I have three lovely children. I have always enjoyed writing. Poetry is new to me. more…

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