Prisoner in paradise
MUDAVATH PRIYATHAM NAIK 2000 (Kurnool)
Her rage is not a barrier for
him to stop talking to the girl,
Her age is not a privilege for
him to decide that girl,
Her wages are not the thing
he gets for his own savage,
Her little crispy nose is what
he deserves from the girl,
Her fears are his only eve for sadness,
Her smile is his only source of happiness,
Her eyes drowned in her lens and tears,
Her only destiny and the eyes make him
more a human than a prisoner in the paradise!
About this poem
Any relationship gets tougher when it gets one sided submissiveness or dominance, about that, and about a girl who is not at all possessive, if the guy is dominant and if the relationship doesn't hold much further, it is as if he is locked in a nice place , but cannot make a move.
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Submitted by mpriyatham2000 on May 22, 2022
Modified by mpriyatham2000 on May 22, 2022
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| Stanza Lengths | 13 |
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